The two things I learned about Nelson Mandela and the apartheid was that the separation of racial societies in South Africa resulted in police brutality and the imprisonment that lasted 27 years. In June of 1976, a group of schoolchildren were protesting, which
resulted in the many deaths. The government also placed blacks outside of South Africa to separate them from the white society. The apartheid resulted in hundreds of deaths and multiple protest that lead blacks to jail.
I have a few problems that seems to me that affects my paper. It seems my paper could be more in depth with woman rights and education for blacks. I think I need to learn more on embedding quotations because I am going to include more quotes stated by Mandela. I also have problems with repeating the same information and how bad inequality was in South Africa.
Wow, Kolin, I want to read your paper. That is wrong bad stuff that happened so I don't see how you are biased you are just right! Yep, I have had some citation problems. Good luck with your paper.
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