The Writing Center was a helpful place to improve on my paper. My writing fellow and I worked on my present tense and focused on one topic. We continued to work on how to stop the repetition in my paper and improve my formatting. We also worked on my introduction and conclusion, which was the toughest thing to do for this paper. We also focused more on the teacher's feedback to get ways to change up the paper.
Since I've been to the Writing Center, I looked for useless information such as quotations that doesn't support my argument. My conclusion doesn't bring up new information that doesn't support my claim and my introduction gives a perfect background of Lord of the Flies and my thesis. I worked on looking at sentences that is not needed and not explaining the story.
I agree with your feedback from the Writing Center. I also thought that it was very helpful.
ReplyDeleteI think the same thing too Kolin. I think that the Writing Center was helpful.
ReplyDeleteI had to work on tense too. They helped me out a lot
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